中考英语提示作文
写作技巧指导
写作
能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；
能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师的指导下进行修改；
能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；
能简单描述人物或事件；
能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落
或操作说明。
语言技能五级
中考作文评分标准
第一档（ 10-12分）
包含所有信息，内容完整，语句通顺，意思连贯。没有或基本没有语法、拼写错误，书写规范，词数符合要求。
第二档（ 7-9分）
包含大部分信息，内容较完整，表达基本清楚，语句较通顺，仅有少量语法、拼写错误，书写规范，词数基本符合要求。
第三档（ 4-6分）
写出基本信息，语句基本通顺，但句子较简单，表达不够清楚，有部分语法、拼写错误。
第四档（ 1-3分）
只能传达个别信息，通篇只有个别句子可读。
第五档（0分）
只字未写、通篇不知所云或写的内容与所要求内容无关。
认真审题，在题目中画出/圈出要点,找出文章要表达的中心。
写作第一步
审
健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。
审
travel
stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
1. 审文体：
书信/报道/日记/短文
2. 审人称：
第一/二/三人称
3. 审格式：
书信的格式是: 称呼、问候语、正文、
结束语、落 款
4. 审时态：
过去/现在/将来
5. 审内容要点
审
收集素材, 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。
列
写作第二步

根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点
如何度假
调查报告
倡议假日休闲
stay at home
work
visit friends or parents
travel

A lot of people travel .
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.
Enjoy your vacation.
列
brainstorm
Teenagers’
colorful life
We study .
We like listening
to music.
We play
computer games for long.
We like reading
books.
We often play
Sports.
We go to KFC .
Sometimes we travel.
Sometimes we
stay up studying.
Teenagers’
healthy life
We study all day.
We like listening
to music.
We play
computer games for long.
We like reading
books.
We often play
Sports.
We go to KFC.
Sometimes we travel.
Sometimes we
stay up studying.
colorful
healthy
Some students get nervous or angry easily.
Some students fell sleepy/tired.
Others fall asleep difficultily
We will/can study our lessons well.
We can be healthy/happy/active.
We can have enough energy.
A lot of students are fond of chatting /playing computer games on the internet.
Some students like play sports, such as playing basketball, traveling and taking a walk.
Watching TV and listening to music are good ways to relax.
My favourite way to relax is to sleep. I often feel very active after a good sleep.
I like sleeping to relax best.
加
加首尾，使结构完整。
可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。
写作第三步：
3 2 1 4 6 5
Second , we should keep quiet in the library.
First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us don’t like them at all.
Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in our daily life.
What’s more, we ought to return books on time.
Our school rules are good for us, I will try my best to follow them.
Third , we must do lots of homework.
A lot of people travel .
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.
How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
a nice head
a nice tail
a nice body
How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.
中心句和结尾句
It is necessary/important for us to relax ourselves because we students are under too much pressure.
Our students are under too much pressure. So it is necessary/important for us to relax ourselves.
Let’s learn to relax.
So you should learn to relax yourself.
连
恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。
写作第四步：
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor;
2.表示选择: or, either…or;
3.表示转折: but, however, although, though,
4.表示因果: because, so, since, for;
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, on the one hand…on the other hand;
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, in other words;
8.表示顺序: first(of ll) , firstly, second(ly), next,later, then,from then on,finally,in the end;
9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually, in fact,as a matter of fact;
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking,
关联词
Let’s play the game.
________ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.
He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert _________.
We like doing kinds of sports, _______ swimming, running and hiking.
_____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. ______, he smiled.
Although
instead
such as
First
Next
Finally
How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
连
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report.
According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
美
It is necessary/important for us to relax ourselves because we students are under too much pressure. For example, Some students often get nervous/angry easily and others fell sleepy/tired. If we want to be healthy and have enough energy to study our lessons well, we should learn to relax. Here are some ways to relax. A lot of students like chatting /playing com-puter games on the internet while some people like playing sports, such as playing basketball, traveling or taking a walk. What’s more, both watching TV and listening to music are good ways to relax. I like sleeping to relax best. After a good sleep, I often feel very active. So you should learn to relax yourself.
美
规范书写,保持卷面整洁；
修改语法、拼写错误，避免常识性错误，如时态、单复数、主谓一致、大小写等；
多用简单句，在有把握的情况下使用复合句；
注意控制字数，但决不可抄阅读文章；
选好词句，避开自己不会的词汇，美化短文。
写作第五步：

Skill One Make your sentences correct
Good good study, day day up.
We should do sports a week once.
Save the environment is our duty.
There is going to have a meeting today.
I hope I can come true my dream.
She like playing volleyball.
He yesterday by bike go to school.
once a week
Saving
be
achieve
likes
by bike
yesterday.
went
Skill Two Express in different ways
The teenagers like the computers.
The teenagers are fond of the computers.
We shouldn’t eat junk food.
We should stay away from the junk food.
When he spoke, he got more excited.
The more he spoke, the more excited he got.
We should learn English grammar.
It’s important to learn English grammar.
It is important for us to relax because we students are under too much pressure. For example, Some students often get nervous easily and others fell tired. If we want to be healthy and have enough energy to study our lessons well, we should learn to relax. Many students like chatting on the internet while some people like playing sports. What’s more, Travelling and listening to music are good ways to relax. I like sleeping best. After a good sleep, I often feel very active. So you should learn to relax yourself.
书面表达写作技巧
审
列
加
连
美
书面表达
以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于80个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。
Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型供参考）
My dream is to be…/to do…/to go…
I enjoy /like/prefer…
To make my dream come true, I …
If my dream comes true…
I have a dream
Have you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are cool! Yeah, it’s my dream to be a professional bike rider.
I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, I’ve been riding for 5 years. Some people think it’s dangerous, I don’t think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly. Exciting? That is!
To make my dream come true, I’ll practice more after middle school. Also, I’ll watch more bike racing to learn from the riders. I hope my dream will come true, if so, I can enjoy the life I like best.
Passage One
I have a dream
Anybody has a dream. But different people have different dreams.
Most people always dream to be popular or rich. But my dream is very special, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream? Just because I admire they’re free, they can do everything they want.
When they’re flying in the sky, they look beautiful, even they’re the most beautiful animals. I really want to enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky. However, I know it won’t be achieved any more.
It’s just a dream, in my heart.
Passage Two
Passage Three
I have a dream
My dream is to be a basketball player. I like it because I think it very interesting. It can make me become very happy and healthy. To make me dream come true. I need try to do it. And I need take some time to do it. I need practice every day. If my dream come true, I will more thy to do it.
Homework
自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后，校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影。对于这样的倡议，你在学校做了一个调查，有些学生觉的好，有些学生觉的不好。请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文，并谈谈自己的看法，发表在学校的刊物上，开头已经写好。


I did a survey about whether middle
school students should run 1500 meters
every day. Here are the results.
Thank you !
All of us have holidays in our daily life, but how do people spend their holiday? We did a survey and here are the results.
— from Cai Piaoli
It’s nothing better than having a rest after working ! So how do people rest themselves on vacation? According to our survey, there are several ways.
— from Zhang Shiyi
All in all, different people have different ways to relax themselves. But I suggest that we should enjoy the holiday, then we may work better.
— from Liu Miao
So this year, why not consider going outside? Spend your healthy holiday and then get more energy for work or study.
— from Wu You